Monday, September 21, 2009

A Kiss to Remember...


It was just another Sunday morning as she lay in bed barely awake. With her eyes still closed she reached across, felt around for the power button and found it with ease. This had become part of her morning ritual...checking all the check-ables (e-mails, Facebook, Blogger etc) before getting out of bed. Thank goodness for the "Hibernate" option, so she dsn't have to sign in to everything...just hit refresh and voila!

No important e-mails, all junk as usual. Off to FB to see who's got new pics up or man- drama/personal issues up as their status message...Hmmm new friend request? Probably some old high-school friend or the usual "can I get to know you better" people who never fail to murder the English language. Seconds later, she's sitting up wide awake and alert, with the laptop on her lap starring at the picture. "No way!, it can't be!" This has got to be some coincidence of some sort.

It just couldn't be!
How? After all this while, she had never forgotten. She remembered it all like it was last- week. It was over before it even took off, but still yet unlike all the others, this one she remembered, and remembered well. Why? She didn't know why, but somehow she remembered; and as the memories began to flood her thoughts, something inside of her stirred, and awoke a warmth that made her toes curl, and her face light up with a smile...

It had been one of those early, registration days of freshman year, nothing productive had been done, so before heading home, herself and B'lola decided to stop at a friend's (Kem) off-campus hostel and say hi. It was there that they first laid eyes on each other. No, it wasn't a love at first sight moment, neither was it a wow-ing moment, but whatever it was, it was a moment neither one of them forgot. He gave her a nick-name instantly, they exchanged numbers and life went on.

She was a freshman, he was final year, with six years age difference. And with that year difference she knew nothing serious was going to happen, so she made up her mind not to lay an emotional foundation. Not to get attached. Enjoy his company, and keep it moving. But before she knew it, she began to like him...a lot! And his company was not the only thing she was enjoying, and liking a lot; his kisses were just as intriguing and ad
dictive...they were like no other.

There was something about the way he went about it; the pace- never rushed, the intensity- just right, the rhythm- in sync, variety- he had it. She wanted it all, and boy! did she get it. Tender kiss on the lips for starters, then slowly she parted her lips for more, and liked what she got. Soft, but firm...his tongue...gently but confidently navigating every corner of her mouth, like he'd been there before. Damn! it felt so good and tasted even better...think warm, melted chocolate...caressing your tongue and making sweet...sweet love to it, yeah! It was that good.

Oh! how vivid and clear the memories were even after three years. The phone-calls, the giddy-butterfly feeling, his voice, his calm and laid-back demeanor, his laugh -deep, his humor, and the late night rendezvous. How could she forget that? Driving through campus and kissing as he drove...and then the nights at the car-park; driver's seat fully reclined, music playing, her 4'11 frame easily straddling him and... Well, let's just say thank goodness for tinted windows. What had happened? How did they go their seperate ways?

Oh yeah...she had disappeared into thin air, left the country without a word. There was no emotional attachment or foundation, but there were memories that she had carried with her all along. Now here he was three years down the road, sending her a Facebook friend request, and a message. Who would have thunk it? With a smile on her face and butterflies in her tummy, she hit 'Accept'. Now what? She'll have to wait and see... He's probably married, engaged or something, but hey why should she care, she was in a relationship and doing ok. This is just old friends re-uniting via Facebook, right?

Well, only time will tell...
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Hello Blogsville,

How's everyone doing? Hope great! It's the start of another week, and the hustle continues. Work, school, projects, meetings, dead-lines, school-run, and so on. The Lord is our strength!

As usual, nothing hot and news-worthy happened @ this end, regular boring weekend. Thanks to everyone who read, and commented on my last post! I had a really great time answering the questions, even though ML believes he has the right answers to some of the questions...lol. Like the one that said describe urself in one word, his answer? COMPACT. Which honestly, is a pretty spot-on description of me.

Thanks again to Kemberly! I won a palette! My blog stalking has finally been rewarded. :). I was actually gonna invest in some MAC eye-shadow, but now I can pocket my money...who talk say free thing no good?Lol.

Hope you guys read the story above. I haven't written anything fiction or non-fiction in a really long-time. I used to love to write, but I dnt know what happened to me. *sigh* Make God no vex say I no use the talent when him give me o. I hope u guys enjoyed it; Is it real or did I make it up? Hmmm...lol...you decide. Looking forward to your ideas, and critiques!


Have a great day, and an AWESOMEY week ahead!!!

Talk to you guys soon,
xoxo,
Miss Enigma!

12 comments:

Zena said...

I'm first?

woohooooooooo!! (Does victory dance)


You grew up my sister that's what happened, but I liked it, it read real, as in I could actually picture the whole thing

If you keep writing it will come back to you

Rene said...

i say real, so is it real?

sweetness said...

There is always something hot bout freshmen and final year students lol

ttlolla said...

I thought thatt was real, i hope its not for the sake of sanity because the major drama that will ensue from this wont be easy.

Agree with sweetness, experience and naivety...so hot

leggy said...

i loved the story above...and apart from the part about them going their seperate ways and they tinted glass ish..thats technically the story of my life except..we still arent dating.i loved it.

Sugarking said...

Bloody hell!! why did I think u were a guy before??!!! I saw d place about getting a MAC one thing one thing and was shocked. Cool story sha!

Ms. 'dufa said...

I liked the story. It was so visual, as in I could picture it vividly. It felt real. Wishing u had taken it further....

Myne Whitman said...

You write well and think of if you write more. A few grammar and punc but they don't hurt the story which is tight by the way. I'm not sure of the timeline but you left it on a cool suspense. Nice one, read very real so kudos.

Fabulo-la said...

Fiction is really a mirror of the non fiction that is our lives..so even if it is not real, it really is...get it???
lool


Im loosing it..lool
How r u babes?
xxx

jhazmyn said...

REAL REAL REAL...and i like me the story so pls update sharp sharp :-)

David.фаворит Бога номер-один said...

HAHA!!!
that one no be fiction...so what's up with him?
nice story though...

UnderCover07 said...

Lol...why is everyone so certain it is real. Well, like I said time will tell o...

Blogsville, una like gist...lol...chei!